What a wonderful and sincere message this poem has! It is definitely one of your better pieces. It has an originality and spark that shines through. The creative way you described such lovely feelings, while at the same time labeling each feeling as "not quite it" was a lovely touch that added a superb creative flair and ambience to the poem as a whole. I do love to read your work, especially when it lives up to the hype ;)

Good job on this one, hun! Sorry it's taken me months to review! :( I've not been on here very much. Good choice of imagery, I really liked it. *hugs*