Reviews for Love Makes Us Act Like We Are Fools

Isheth 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abuseSo cute. So so cute. >< And I can see myself doing that hahaha. So cute.
-Just-a-hopeless-dreamer- 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abuseI really loved this alot. and moulin rouge is amazing! and yeah.
Barrister Disaster 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseWow! I like your story, especially from the middle downward. The language so simple exactly to suit everybody. However I have some little suggestions: 1. Your title have said too much story, it makes your story too predictable, thus killing the suspense a good story should have. 2. The story lacks some elements of reality, I don't expect jus to b kissed by a girl wen we re meetin for the first time just because we have a common interest in a particular music. 3. The quotes from the song should have been identified by italics to make it clearly lyrical. and different quotes should have different lines. N.B I am making you one of my favorite author list. But you hava marvelous potential Keep Writing