*eyetwitch* You know, if I had the time and energy, I think I would have to copy each one of these chapters into word and fiddle with the formatting. You know, edit each of the different scenes together with breaks and such.

Hmm. So, if you do decide to do that once it's all finished and you want a hand with it, just ask. College homework aside I wouldn't mind helping with that. Then I can reread it and have it make more sense all at once! :3

Anthony is oh so shiny :3 *pets him*

And, yay, Zaitsu/Kayla OTP.

Kanoc irritates me. And there's all this plot here and it's been twenty chapters BUT NOTHING IS BECOMING CLEAR YET.

*sobs* Damn it, you're doing this on purpose to us poor readers so we keep reading lest our brains explode from wondering what's gonna happen next, aren't you?

Chiichii is awesomness condensed into a neat girl sized package.

And more plot-like things rear their heads!

Keith/Iicha amuses me so.

Holy crap. A chapter without drama, until the end! It reminds me... Of a soap opera. The drama never stops. This week on Insanity: ...

XD Yay.

*bashes Zaitsu and Kayla's head together*

*grumbles under breath* Stupid stubborn people these days...

Ryan appears to be the most normal out of everyone. And Andrew and Anthony are love. As usual.

"I have to get out of here." She told them. "There are people coming that want me dead, and if I stay here all of you will be in danger."

That bit is repeated twice, one by Ryuu's voice and once by yours. I think it should only be in Ryuu's though?

Bulletproof glass ♥ ♥

Eirose is shiny, and I want more background on Kayla. *pokes the massive fic* ...why must it be so long?

T^T NO! ZAITSU!

If my kids broke 4 X-boxes, I wouldn't get them another one. ^^;

I wonder if punching your stomach would work. XD

In Canada, 18 is the legal drinking age. XD

Nu! T_T

Stupid place to stop. MORE! ;__;

Everyone goes from fine to violent in a matter of seconds. ^^;

Zaitsu seriously needs to quit smoking, it really turns down the hotness.