| Reviews for Insanity |
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PKC 12/10/07 . chapter 30 "I was raised by two queers and Iicha, how do you think it was?" he laughed a bit. I love this line so much XD |
lslines 11/27/07 . chapter 11HaHA! Finally I get to read more! There's some strange things with tenses in here, but that's to be expected in an RP, i suppose. I know I've read half of this before, when you were RPing on Gaia. Lily is adorable. Penguins, hee |
PKC 11/20/07 . chapter 29 That was a pleasant surprise coming home from school, three new chapters of Insanity! The musical instrument bit was sweet. Sigh count is huge though, but it's three chapters all together. o.o |
PKC 11/17/07 . chapter 26 XD Cute. Pancakes, malls, "dates". I didn't notice any sighs this episode... |
Mike 11/10/07 . chapter 2 Wow...uh...aliens, anciant egyptians with computer chip/dragon problems, and a character named after one of the co-authors... But I guess I should expect that from the title... |
PKC 11/8/07 . chapter 25 Cute with that little Raven-y touch. ; |
xAmax 11/4/07 . chapter 24Why am I editing if it's not being used? X_X |
PKC 11/3/07 . chapter 24 XD Lots of sighs. I like pandas and cats. ; Now, my sister really wants to get on so I have to go. |
Angel Of Jashin 10/31/07 . chapter 23I feel sorry for Iicha. |
xAmax 10/31/07 . chapter 23...430 times? omg... |
Whimsical Exemplar 10/29/07 . chapter 2The second chapter really started to see character development. By having the protagonists speak on their upbringings and histories, it allowed the reader an opportunity to learn more about them, and to sympathize with their plight of being stranded far from home. As in the first chapter, the dual author dynamic made for interesting reading. Keep up the good work! PS: Is the Klaus system close to the Elicoor system? It seems oddly famaliar... |
Dawn Jr 10/28/07 . chapter 4 Aww, how sweet. They spent the night together at a castle. And she didn't care about him being some raven-monster thingy. Ain't that just cute? |
Dawn Jr 10/28/07 . chapter 3 Hmm... Let me guess... He shape-shifts? |
Dawn Jr 10/28/07 . chapter 2 What's up with just mentioning her planet. I hope you bring it up later. Nice family issues, though. Gives it that human touch. xD |
Dawn Jr 10/28/07 . chapter 1 Nice begining, but you kind of just jump into things. No chance to actually describe the char's in much detail. Could be strange for some. But what do I know about other people? Right? |