Hello there,

I just read the 6 chapters posted, and I really like the story so far. I really hope you'll keep posting chapters, because the last one ends in a totally unsatisfactory way. D=
But no matter what, I really want to say thank you for posting those chapters, I enjoyed reading them.

AranaBanana

Wow! I really love this story - despite only being a few chapters long, it managed to capture each character's personality with clarity and definition. Please keep writing! (though I do realise I'm writing this a year after the last update :|) I don't think I could bear it if I never read to the end of this story and found out what happens :D

Much love, Ivana

this is really good. please update soon.

noo a cliff-hanger! hah
Great story! update?

xx

Wow... that was just... wow. Amazing story so far. I'm only on the first chapter, but that was one of the best stories I've read yet. You have a great writing style. :D

D: update please! i really love this story!

I have to say, your story so far is very intriguing. I do hope, that an update is planned in the nearest future.

Superb story! Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

WOOH! Finally got my computer back and running.
My friend had told me you had updated and I've finally gotten a chance to read it.
Honestly I can find no flaws in your writing...again...
But you left me at a cliff hanger...again...
Oh well...at least the next time you update I don't have to wait an eternity to read it because I have my computer fixed. HUZZAH!
I must say your ability to write battle scenes astonishes me as I completely lack that skill. For that I give you two enthusiastic thumbs up!

Oh, and it just had to end at the best part. I feel like I should cry, or at least curl myself up in a fetal position and start sucking my thumb out of sheer despair. If I didn't already love you so much, I think I'd hate you!

Seriously, though, this story is honestly one of the best I've ever read. I don't typically read fantasy, but I'm so glad I made an exception. I'm absolutely enthralled, and I truly do believe that I've already become addicted to your work. Please, please update as soon as you can! I need more.

Oh...I'd forgotten about Enyo. I see that was a mistake, but I'm practically chortling with glee over what I'm hoping will be a very exciting following chapter. You really are almost too good at this.

Amazing. Just...amazing. This was everything that cliffie promised it would be, and more. You've done such a fantastic job that I feel both inspired and intimidated. You're truly gifted, and I'm ecstatic that I stumbled across this story.

You really do have a knack for writing suspenseful cliffies, don't you? I'm seriously at the edge of my seat, waiting for more. This is fantastic!

You know, a lot of stories have great beginnings but then fail to deliver in later chapters. You have more than delivered. This was truly incredible, and I'm completely hooked. Amazing job!

Very powerful beginning. I'm completely hooked, and if I weren't so eager to get to the next chapter and keep reading, I think I'd stop and spend a few hours singing your praises. As it is...must keep reading.