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| no name 2008-07-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseplz continue ur stories they r great!! |
| lola zee 2008-06-20 ch 2,  | abusei love this story because it's not about some skinny girl who gets all the guys its about a real girl and her love issues.love it! |
| cherryblossom99 2008-06-12 ch 2, | abuseit is very good(at last something different). i really would like to read next chapter, altough maybe ting could ** mandi so off that she would find some will power to lost weight. |
| julianne118 2008-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuselol.maybe i typed it too fast.again.as always. xDD i can totally relate.(mina lin...mandi lin...daniel...jaiden daniels...i cant see their resemblance.ofcourse i wont SEE it. ;b) i love your story oh-so-much...lol,once again im hooked. |
| julianne118 2008-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abusei can totally relate.(mina lin...mandi lin...daniel...jaiden daniels...i dont see the resemblance. ;b) i love it so your much...lol,once again im addicted. |
| i don't have an id 2008-03-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseOMG i can't wait for next chapter! |
| Angela 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like the plot for this story and think you should continue it if you weren't planning on it. Very Asian soap opera-ish! :] |
| Dani 2008-02-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseloved this story. I think that none of them, Mandi or Ting, are mean. Mandi made a mistake,as anyone. And you can't blame Ting, she hurt him. Revenge Ting, revenge! ...just kidding lol! update as soon as u can! (I know you are busy) don't leave this story!It's really good. keep on writing! |
| A fat but beautiful woman 2008-02-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think you are a good writer and good game maker but with this story, I do have a problem. I am just under 300 pounds (was 330 pounds but I am getting healthier) and your story actually offends me. I know it's not as bad as some in the fat bashing but it is still too much. The main character must have been horrendous to Ting to make him so cruel to her in return. As a fat girl, she should have never been so mean and he should know better. I will keep waiting to see how this turns out, hopefully you don't make her turn the route of so many female characters and suddenly become perfect. I rather read about a big girl getting the guy for once. I know I did. |
| Nina 2008-02-09 ch 2, anon. | abusewhy don't you keep writing on this story ? I like it a lot !! Lots of love . |
| SakurasBlossoms 2008-02-02 ch 2, | abuseOmg This is good! please continue! |
| JforJenny 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusePlease keep going ~ :D I LOVEE Mandi's personality (: And Ting is such a loser now ): He seemed soo nice > |
| reedoh 2008-01-22 ch 2, | abusei love it, though it makes me feel like dieting more than ever ahahahha anyway PLEASE KEEP GOING :D |
| mm 2008-01-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseWOW! I love the new story!i love as much as i love maid for me, and i think you should keep writing please! WEll gotta go. bye! |
| rohan23 2008-01-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseahh can't wait for the next one. nice concept! |