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| Bazooka Joy 2007-11-09 ch 2, | abuseI LOVE this! Personally I've always liked stories about how a popular guy starts to take interest in a no-so-popular girl and how it evolves. And you've managed to make it funny. I can definitely see myself thinking/saying/behaving in the same ways Charlie is. Well done. |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-10-02 ch 2, | abuseYAYAYAY! Funfunfun!! |
| Sydney-J 14 2007-10-01 ch 2, | abuseaww, I woul be clinging for my life too. Goodhe quit, I cant stand people smoking, plus it stinks like hell! good chapter |
| Sydney-J 14 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abusewow this was so good write more when you can nice way to start the story |
| Conspiring Fools 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseNice begining. If I had a friend named Charlie I would tottaly have to annoy them with that Charlie the Unicorn Video. Charlie, let's go to Candy Cane Moutain CHARLIEE! |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseHAHA! And i love that name for a girl, Charlie, it sounds cool! |