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Reviews For: Innocent and The Rebel

Bazooka Joy
2007-11-09
ch 2,
abuseI LOVE this! Personally I've always liked stories about how a popular guy starts to take interest in a no-so-popular girl and how it evolves. And you've managed to make it funny. I can definitely see myself thinking/saying/behaving in the same ways Charlie is. Well done.
Evil Angel of DOOM
2007-10-02
ch 2,
abuseYAYAYAY! Funfunfun!!
Sydney-J 14
2007-10-01
ch 2,
abuseaww, I woul be clinging for my life too.
Goodhe quit, I cant stand people smoking, plus it stinks like hell!
good chapter
Sydney-J 14
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abusewow
this was so good
write more when you can
nice way to start the story
Conspiring Fools
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abuseNice begining. If I had a friend named Charlie I would tottaly have to annoy them with that Charlie the Unicorn Video.
Charlie, let's go to Candy Cane Moutain CHARLIEE!
Evil Angel of DOOM
2007-09-29
ch 1,
abuseHAHA! And i love that name for a girl, Charlie, it sounds cool!
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