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| The Postscript 2007-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseReally vivid. You really show the double nature of humanity. I don't think I can pick out a favorite line or passage - they are all written really beautifully! You use the semi-colon incorrectly in the last stanza, but other than that your writing technique was great! Keep writing, k. |