UH phsh I hate gossip stuff like that but it was good wrighting ... don't get me wrong

So, everything went for easy to horrible really fast... Not that it's a bad thing, but just saying...

I'm going to read the rest of your story later as the paragraphs are a bit too blocky... need to take a break. But overall, you've got a nice high-school story. Good job!

Paragraphs... too... thick... Anyway, I feel as if something terrible is going to happen, seeing's how everything's going a little TOO easy...

Hm, ok... The big paragraphs are messing up my eyes, but I get what's going on. I hate to say this, but things are going just a bit too easy between Yvette and Drake. Or is Miss Y influencing MY BRAIN?! *cough*

Miss Y is totally bitchy, if you don't mind me saying so. And Yvette seriously is confusing me here... Why did she kiss Vince again?

I feel as if there is something deeper between Vanessa and Yvette... But I wonder what Miss Y will do next.

Miss Y is becoming more and more ominous... I'd still like to know more about the characters...

Hmm, first off: there's a school where teachers care about student gossip? Secondly, there's not much for the reader to hold onto here. I'd like to know more about Miss Y actually...

Hmm, interesting story so far. Usually I'm not into gossip/high-school things, but this is an exception, I think. Sorry about not adding your story to my C2 'til now... Heh.

Good chapter.

Maybe you should start introducing characters who could be the mysterious "Miss Y" to give the reader more to cling to.

Right now it's good though.

Have a terrific day.

~Twilight Starr~

Good start.

This story has potential.

Good luck with writing and this story.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~