lol, sorry it took so long to reveiw this one... I love that this story is written in a sort of abstract - the names are ambiguous, and therefore darkly intriging. Almost like you were writing on the archetypical plane - without delving into the reality side of things... that probubly makes no sense... um, like you took a story and took it down to it's minimalist-est point, where it still maintains it's art and purpose, and then wrote that down. very cool! Anyways, props for writing the only story of late I've enjoyed analyzing.