LOVE! This poem!!

Nice, powerful words her. I don't know if you noticed this, but the words kind of take the shape of a dagger, and it fits the force of the power. I love this!

I really like the contradictions within the piece.. they're really interesting... my favorite line is a tongue like serpents.. thats an awesome simile... great job!

Wow. You're still alive.
:)
I loved this, it is most excellent. (Probably because that's how I feel about a certain person of evil today) but still.

You should write more often! That would be amazingtastic!

Regards,
Ari