This made me smile, especially the first second verses. :) Thanks, great poem!

wow, this has been up for so long and i have yet to read it, trust me, i was there,ya im tellin the honest, I.WAS.THERE.

::Shakes head violently:: Woah, had a weird...moment there...anywho, this was intense, Wonder what was attacking the people? U gonna tell me or do i have to guess? >.<

IDK id better quit now before i ramble on for hours ::looks up at review:: AH! ITS BEGGINING!


-TwilightWolf


p.s. I think im begining to regress...NO! lol

Woah, that was...kinda trippy there. But I loved it. XD
Awesome job. I want more from you.

PS: Going in the favies.

i love this! maybe i'm really sick, but i almost found myself chuckling at certain parts. it was dark and moody, but at the same time, it had really inocent qualities to it, and i thought it was really interesting how it clashed with the content of the poem. I would love to see this made into a childrens book hahaha cause it sounds very much like a nursery rhyme that a creepy old lady would tell to trick or treaters... great work!

awsome, scaryish sweet. I loved it


-TwilightWolf

Ah... a good demonstration of what Hallows Eve can be seen for. Aha, sometimes, only sometimes, do I root for those demons and ghosts. I just wouldn't want to meet one myself.

I like the description and the flow of this poem. I guess your feeling festive about Halloween. What are you planning to be this year, if anything? What are you going to do, go to a party? Anyway,I liked the part where you say "But yes, you're young and innocent. Tasty and yummy you almost fill their tummy". But what else is new, your writing is always interesting. Speaking of writing, I have just started a writer's club up here in Baldwin. It sucks because last week was the first meeting and only 3 or 4 people showed up. Oh well, I guess it's true about me being a social outcast. As long as I can write, I don't really give a damn. Enough about me, your writing is really good so keep at it!

Good narrative poem. The tenses (e.g. fifth verse) seem to be mixed-up sometimes, and there are some spelling errors ('tasty', 'eating'), but this didn't really affect the poem much. I really liked the fourth verse.