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| fleur de l'est 2008-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseOh my God, I hate it when they say that, thanks for speaking out. I always take what they say literally! Like I once said to someone, "I'll miss you", meaning that, and he said "Miss you more" (it's always three words isn't it..). And uh, he didn't. Surprise surprise. >_< I loved the casual tone which gives the piece so much truthfulness, keep up the good work! ~fleur |
| fatbird33 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusehe he that's cool, (that the title is three words long) i loved this because i was expecting it to be about "i love you" and it was just the opposite, you fooled me! i liked the last word too, MEN! so true . |
| purple x pen 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseooh i like this one! again because i can relate but in my case i wanted 3 words and instead i got 2 meaningless ones =P gah! men! |
| painted.music 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abusekonban wa I agree that this isn't your best, but it's funny, which isn't a bad thing. :) The word "loquacious" made me giggle in my mind (because I'm NOT one to giggle out loud, LoL); it always makes me get like that... it just sounds so... giggly. I don't know. I'm odd, LoL. Last year I asked my doctor what his favorite word was, and he said, "What? Don't be ridiculous. You can't have a favorite word!" I replied, "Not true -- my favorite word is discombobulated. You can have a favorite word." But he kept saying I was being ridiculous and that there's no such thing as a favorite word. Before I left, I told him, "I'm just warning you -- when I come back next year, I'll be expecting an answer." I didn't end up going to him this year, but my baby brother did. I told my dad to ask... and -- he actually chose one: loquacious! So this poem made me think of him and that scene, which is why I find it to be a funny word. Well, part of the reason. The other part is simply that it SOUNDS funny, LoL. I liked the ending: "Men!" At first I didn't really like it, but now I do. Don't know what changed my mind. *shrug* Kudos. :) Ha det -Shan- |
| Eagle Seance 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseA simplistic monologue poem. I liked the motif ('see you later')- very effective! |