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| The Un-great-ful 2008-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseHa,"reason takes it's last swig" - I like that. Sadly you got a bit pious towards the end, going on about heaven and god. Have our discussions taught you nothing! There is no god! There is no heaven! There is only hate! *Unnecessary rage* OK i'm normal again. I also liked the idea of your only friend being a "dumbed down magnet", who did that represent? |
| simpleplan13 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI really like the first line.. its so true and beuatifully described.. the whole angel thing is great too |