This story is seriously great. I'm completely hooked! please write more!

oh my gosh!! thats a srsly good story! KEEP UPDATING PLEASE :D
i hereby... FAVOURITE U!!

wow a lot of stuff happens her senior year! I like the cliff hanger at the end, the year burt finally came home...dun dun dun. very nice! update soon!

Oh! This is really good. I wonder how Burt is going to be now. I'm so sad that she broke all the things that he made for her...

I was afraid that this would be a sci-fi story when I first got the Alert message. Hahahhaa. But I'm really glad I gave it a try. :]

I like how you've written this story. It's fluent and the plot flows, just poignant enough that when you reach the end it makes you want to sniffle and go 'aw'. Good job, really. Especially the imagery you used about Piper destroying all the treasured creations Burt made, and how the dragon was the lone one that stood out and was mostly intact.

And I presume you're going to continue this right? 'Cos you did leave all the little bits about Mona, and Burt's family hanging. I can't wait to read more about this. Keep writing! =)