I love poetry, I know this feeling, and you captured it well. Beautiful, haunting.

.. Wow.

I love it.

I can't even put it into words.

This is brilliant.

I love this verse -

the diabolical blend of

smitten (you’re the only one i’ll ever need)

and skanky (but not the only one i’ll ever want)

Bravo.

konnichi wa

*shiver* What a dreadful poem. Sorry... let me correct myself. What a dreadful topic to be forced to write about. What a beautifully written poem, though. I'm not *positive*, but I interpretted it to mean rape and, of course, cutting. Am I wrong? - Did this really happen to you? (Please say no)

Haunting but beautiful. I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your poetry.

Zaijen

-Shan-

lovelovelove. i love your work.'a little blood wont hurt me' genius. you write with such emotion, its so great.

the only lines i didn't like,

"you’re a handful of irony/covered in layers of gold and shit/(dig through all the shit until you find the gold)"

You have excellent word choice.

Great job.

It really paints a detailed picture in the mind.

.amazing!

The last few lines are my favorite,

their so hard hitting.

the jessica loves this! i actually considered doing this literally, but couldnt decide what to write and therefore remain without scars. i do like the whole death of hypocrisy theme too. grr. hypocrisy. yuck.