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| Crossing the Rubicon 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing. For some reason, I didn't expect the last couple lines, and they made the piece even greater than it was to begin with. The style didn't feel as jarring as I would normally expect it to be, so you pulled it off well. Great poem. This is going on my fav's. |