I absolutely love this story. Kisten is just ... absolutely amazing. And Drew is hot ... as is Theo ... Tyler just ... kinda creeps me out sometimes ... at others he's really cute. Cheyenne's rocks, totally. She reminds me of some of my friends lol.

I just love how everything goes along so smoothly. And the past chapters are great. Especially Jason's. It shows his point of view of things. He did care for Kisten ... just ... not enough to give up his drugs ... and it seems like his family life was kinda fucked up >.>

Anyway, like I said before, I love this story, and I await eagerly for another chapter.

Hi I found this story through the LATSAAwards and I have to say,I fucking love it!I hope you bring Jason into the story cuz Kisten's past seems unresolved and I'd really like him to get some closure from Jason.(Like get in a few revenge punches and kicks y'know,something like that) I like Drew and Kisten together for the hot smut scenes they have,but he's too much like Jason in the way of physical abuse.So I'm kinda wishing that Theo's resolve to keep his hands off Kist crumbles,then he breaks up with Tyler and sweeps Kist off his feet.=D (He has unfinished business with Kist too!Not happy with Theo bottoming) Please do continue this story,its too good to be left unfinished,and on such a cliffhanger?What the hell?There's hot smex to come yet between Drew and Kist.T.T Not to say the unresolved situation between Kist,Theo and Drew.I really wanna see Kist get together with a guy who isn't an asshole,he deserves it with all the shit he has went through.Thanks for writing this story,I look forward to you continuing this.=)

Ok I definitely expected Kisten to be the bottom in that pairing. It was interesting to see it switch. This is a great story, very well written and incredibly funny. Good job and keep it up!

omg i was so not expectig to read something like that. that was hilarious!

My mind has been raped. I wanted there to be a happy ending, with Theo and Kisten getting together, or at least Kisten realising that Drew is bad for him... but it doesn't end. It's not finished. It probably won't be. MY INSIDES HURT. The borderlineness of Drew, how he's just so ALMOST okay, but with that little bit of manipulativeness... it's so much more painful than outright bad. But, um, compliments on the writing. Amazing job with the characters. A truly varied cast, with complex personalities. Tyler is adorable. And, yeah, like I said, with Drew - he's not a bad guy. You do well with that balance. The good guys do some pretty bad things, and the bad guys aren't all bad, just human.

But yes, I really wish this had a conclusion. I was really hoping for a happy ending. I hope, at least, that it wouldn't end with Drew and Kisten together. I just can't feel OKAY with that. Anyway, I am left feeling violated, which is a compliment to your writing since evoking any strong emotion in a reader tends to be a good thing. It just feels bad that it's just... all that and then... things didn't get alright! Oh man, this story has mind fucked me. Thanks.

HAHAHAHA OH GOD I AM KIND OF IN LOVE WITH TY. Seriously. He's so cute! Okay, just had to get that out. Back to reading now.

Hi! I love this story! Um, I do think the stuttering is cute when in a dialogue, but not so much in the narratives because then it just becomes distracting and sort of ruins one's train of thought, even if it is written from a first-person perspective. But that's just probably me. I also think the characters are really dynamic, and they have awesome chemistry and sexual tension. You're really good at that, the creating sexual tension part, I mean. That's not to say that the actual sex parts weren't good, because they were freakin' hot! *blush* Also, you're one of the few writers whose work I've read here who successfully manages not to overwhelm the story because of the many characters. Overall, I think this is a fantastic story and I can't wait to read the rest of it!

One more thing, though. Are you gonna go into the "Canadian twink who keeps stealing my quarters" story arc more? Not that there's anything wrong with the direction you're taking the story, it's just that it was in the summary. :D

P.S.
I'm actually for Team Theo! Because he's the nice one and I wish Kist would choose him over Drew instead, even though it doesn't seem likely anymore. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is, I hope they have sex again! And I hope Kist bottoms this time! *blush*

Love Kisten, Drew and Theo! (Tyler's a sweetie) The tension... i propose: replace dildo with Theo and chuck Tyler into the mix *pretty please!*

I have an account on here, but I've noticed I'm not logged in. That's alright. I'm not going to :). BUT. I needed to review this story. It was essential.

Mostly for one chapter, and one chapter only: 21, Stop. I...I don't even know what to tell you man. I cried. I fucking cried, and then I got angry, and then I had to watch America's Next Top Model to wind down a little.
Just...fuck. Jason.

I really. I. Ugh. Right. Intelligence. -big sigh-. I hate him. Point blank. And not even for his drug abuse, or his treatment of Kisten, or their fucked relationship...It's just...It's his lack of remorse. That's what got me. It made me so fucking angry that he could do all the fucking hoopla that he did and not feel an ounce of compassion or *regret*, because fuck, he justified it to himself. That's what psychopaths do. They can't regret. And. Ugh.

It hit a lot of buttons, and I felt so helpless for Kisten, because he was stuck in this, this cycle, you know? It's so sad that this happens every day, and I personally, have never dealt with any type of situation of this caliber...but damn. That's what I love about your story. You didn't have to.
Just reading could fully ecompass their emotions. I was able to relate.

I almost wish I had started this from the very beginning, when you were first posting, because I think that the Author-Reviewer relationship you've established with some of your fans is awesome. I feel out of the loop lol. But I'm glad I finally read this, because shit, it's damn amazing. Everything is. Especially the way you deal with relationships.

I often find that a lot of the stories on here are so black and white, really choppy you know? Like, there's a defined problem, and solution, and relationship...and it's nice sometimes, but THIS, your story, is what real life is like. Sometimes, there is no real problem. You just feel like shit, and you don't even know who's causing it. I loved, loved, loved that in your writing.

And Kisten's damn hilarious. Drew's a douchecat. And I wish he'd get jealous more often, because *that's* attractive on anyone. Especially coupled with arrogance. I think it's my favorite combination ;).

Theo is a cutie patootie. And. I heart him. A lot. BUT. I also heart Drew. Just in a more sadistic manor. There's something oddly attractive about crazy people, and I think this says a lot about my choice in men, but damn, give me a pyromaniac anyday ;).

Anyways. I really just wanted to let you know all of that I guess. And good luck moving away to Europe. The men and women ARE way hotter over there. And, honestly, I laughed so hard when I found out that was your main iniative for moving. It sounds so much like something I would do.

Mucho love and everything,

-Emily

I really like the flashbacks in this story. They're really graphic, but i think it makes everything more real. I'm seriously hooked and i love your characters + the character development of Kisten is brilliant! I really like Theo =D. I hope you continue writting the story, leaving it as it is would seem like a waste. Even if you don't i just want you to know i'm a fan =]

So, I realize that it's been... a pretty damn long time since you last updated, and it's kind of lame that I'm still reviewing even though it's been more than a year because, let's face it, the chances of you continuing this after that long are somewhat slim. But I still needed to review to let you know that you're absolutely fucking fantastic.
I think that this is the only love triangle thing that I've ever actually cared to read, because it's so fucking fantastic.
Just figured you should know.

Excellent story! I'm a little sad cause I just looked at the update date and I think this this story may be dead and all I could think is "No!" You're such an fucking amazing writer! I think your Jason bit was the best portrayal of a protagonist that I've ever seen on Fictionpress. And I just don't want to have to give up on Drew/Kisten! They seem so impossible yet so perfect. It's the absolute best mix. So... I guess I'll just hope it's not over. -_- Especially since you left us with a cliffhanger.

hey, found you off of the SKoW awards site, and I absolutely please update soon! positively love this story!

At first i wasnt really into reading about his past but its interesting to read Jason's point of view. at the same time its hard to watch Kis get used and beat without doing anything. :(

I really dont think u should bring Jason i mean kis has enough to worry about when it comes to guys, which i hope he picks Theo (*wink,wink*)

( my comments dont go in order b/c i went baack to comment some of the chapters i didnt the first time around.lol)

BTW- Please Update, its been like 2 years. plus i hate when ppl start stories then dont finish them...dont be like that please

Go Chey!...i was soo pround of her during the meeting, i feel so bad for her i know how it feels to be the only single in the group of your friends :(

im glad she and Theo told Kis the truth about Drew, i love Drew and all(i mean who couldnt) but some of the things he said u just dont say to someone u care about. I love Kis but i wish he'd stop acting so spineless, i just wish he'd man up for once