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| Scott 2007-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseIf she eat his tongue she would taste it. :P Sorry, okay, I like the concept of the eating of the other, and you space and paragraph or whatever its called wonderfully, much better than those eye sores most give. I don't know why the guy was wearing blaik nail polish and the fact that they're starving in a forest brings say to another level, if your desperate enough to go cannibal can't you just eat a tree or something? XD. Monster? I mean really? Monster? Not needed, it didn't help the story, can't they just get lost? Anyways, it was an interesting read. ~Scott :) |
| She Had Somewhere To Go. 2007-10-01 ch 1,  | abuseVERY GOOD |
| Anne Onymus 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseLol Jade :P "If you bit off part of your own tongue, but it didn't bleed; do you think you could taste it?" You're one freaky kid :P |
| Crimson Azure 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuse:O I will never be able to look at you in the same way, ever again. You Scare me ! It was well written in my opinion *nod* i dunno if i enjoyed it or was just totally freaked, then again knowing you it doesn't surprise me that this of all Stories came out of you :P Crimson :) |
| gatekeeper lover 2007-09-30 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was fun to read. honestly, write more. it was fun. i'm sorry if thats not very detailed but what more can i say? |