You know, this is probably the most I have ever reviewed at one time. :O
I seriously love this story, otherwise I would just lurk and enjoy like usual. Have to say though, if you keep stopping things suddenly like that you might kill me. Cliff-hangers are terrible for my health.
Hope you update soon!

Oh, and I still think Riker's sexy [in an evil, demented sort of way]. xD

I have to say, I really love this story. The characters are very interesting and far from being cliched or unoriginal. At this point, I'm about ready to beat you upside the head with a koala plush for just ending the last chapter like that. I think Riker is my favorite so far, merely because he's an enigma at this point. I also like Rhenin and Gwen a lot.
Please update soon!

M. I like the way this story is going. Please update soon. =]

Hmm, so the vampire doesn't actually like being a vampire? And did Jeeves kill Breezie? If he did, it doesn't seem a very smart thing to do. I want to see how this carries on, please update soon!

I've always wondered how to spell "dawdle". This would make such an awesome movie. Please don't stop writing, I think all supernatural whores like me can agree on the ingeniousness of it. You can never go wrong with odd demon-things. I don't have much in the way of critic to say, but count this as encouragement.

So I wonder what the thing in his eye did? I like it, but i think it would be good if there was a little bit more description on how Rhenin is feeling and things like that. Hope you update soon!

very good! i like it so far!

I like it, but I wouldn't have thought he'd have bullets in his pocket. Wouldn't he have been searched and they'd have been confiscated?

I like it so far. I especially like the line near the beginning "with the deep orange piercing through the black clouds of depression."
"It was sort of irritating that the ceiling was leaking". I think you should take out the "sort of". It doesn't seem right to me in the sentence.
I'm glad there was explanation as to why she wasn't going insane. Lots of writers put in extraordinary events that a human would never believe, yet all the character seems is slightly surprised.
And finally, the cosmos has played another cruel joke. Nothing important, but the paranoid techie seems very similar to Foaly from Artemis Fowl. (A paranoid techie convinced the secret services are always watching them).
On to the next chapter!