this makes me sad.

i SO wanted them to make up. but that only happens in cliches. and youre an amazing writer. i should have expected a more practical ending. >_>

Sweet. Really awesome. Can't think of any criticism. Probably one of my favourite one-shots on Fictionpress, and I have no idea why. I just loved it.

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I enjoyed reading that. I liked how it was sort of snappy, and how the detail about where he was going, and the reason behind it was left for us to interpret.
I kinda smiled at the irony (of this line "You don’t have one goddamn spiritual bone in your body.”), and sort of just enjoyed the story for itself.

It's well written, and it leaves an impression.

I do sorta wish that i could have gone o reading it or longer... but that's just how life goes sometimes, right? yup.

Kay.

Bye now ^_^

Neat story! I liked the insults and how it really did go from trying to hide the pain to actually hurting the other person. Awesome story.

It was cute! I really liked it. It made me smile, and it brightened my day. I'm kind of glad they didn't get together, though. It was perfect the way it was.

well since my FP account is new .. i have to reply to you in another review .. my sisters nameis ToxicPanda

dont ask why.. haha ,
and i REALLY liked this .. its really really good .

Interesting...

i like it. i kept waiting for the cliche to happen, but then i realized it was better with out it! nice, nice.

Was this supposed to be more funny or romantic? I thought the ending should have been more climatic since the beginning was tragic and they kept in touch the whole time. For example, because the bulemic part was only one line, that made it sort of unimpressionable. =(
But it was a fun read. Good job.

Hey you have a great story there,
At first when I was reading I was about to say the conversation was childish then you suddenly told us she was 17, that was really awesome.

My only problem was the emotional lady, she seemed to have a confused emotion that fluctuates rapidly, and that is not natural, I think you need to work on that.

Hope I helped.

Keep writing.

I'm pretty sure I already told you this amused me.
Because it did.
I think the breakdown of their friendship was well-played. And it's just like a teenager to try to protect his friend, but go about it entirely the wrong way. So, yes, this is really bittersweet.

I'm glad she showered, though. She Internet-smelled, dude.

Loved it. I think my faveorite part was the ending. I loved the way you portrayed your characters.

I really liked that! I think the bit that I liked the most was the end, it wasn't a sappy happy ending or a depressing emo ending. It was just...cool. Your blend of humor and cutting remarks were interesting, I could never be quite sure when they were having fun and when they were really trying to hurt each other, as I'm sure neither of them could tell either.

I sincerely enjoyed this, thank you so much for writing it!
Ollie May

Frizza, Mqquin- you are brillian!

LOVE IT! :) It's so emo!! lmao\

but its cute!

I like that you not only feel bad for the girl - being that you "see" her suffering, but you also feel bad for the guy -he gets left at the alter and everything

I really like it :)

Though the whole time youre waitintg for them to get together

its almsot bittersweet because it's this happy peacefu ending, but its not actually happy bc they dont end up together

so sad that hes super hot. in my imagination she "accdentally" bumps into him again. and this time they don't end up in goodbye! lol

"I would like to thank the academy and Liat. Her reviews rock my socks off!!"

that was the bestest story ever. i felt the chemistry between the two characters and i loved it. It honestly could happen to anyone and it's so cool and cute. I also liked the way that you ended it; you didn't go overboard or anything. Major props - that was amazing...please write more stories like that!