Wonderfully written deary, I was curious when I saw the title and so I click here. ;] please update soon.

I like that name Damon. Since I barely finished reading a book about a vampire named Damon and, I was planning on using it. Lol. Well, nice begining, and dont worry much of the leght of it. :D I liked it. I love romantic supernatural stories. Anyway, keep writting. You'll be hearing from me again.

Uh oh, Damon doesn't sound like he wants friends. Good spelling, good grammer (a lot better than some kids I know). Please put up another chapter, I want to know what happens to Damon and Sarah!

This story is great so far! I can't wait for more, and I do so love the apparent bad boy Damon... Please write more!