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Reviews For: Stream of Consciousness

no.peace.los.angeles
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseOh, that was fantastic. Stream of consciousness is such an interesting form to work with, and it's really helpful when you're having a writer's block or are just looking for fresh ideas. I love the idea of feeling purple! That's so original. Really nice piece you have here. Keep writing! :)
Redeemed
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseAmazing. Write more of these.
Moondog Dozier
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseExcellent burst. I really like this because you delve into imagery and specifics as it wanders in the progression. I always feel that it good at times to get out of established patterns, and preconceived notions when writing to expand your sphere of influence and emotional output. You've definately done that here, as it is freer and more spontaneously visual than others of yours that i've read. This seems to be a switch from your usual emotionally driven works to a philosophical observation that extends into unforeseen avenues as it continues. I guess as the reader I see the shift in not only form, but conceptual function as well. I like the differentiation in style, as it shows a differing perspective than your usual works. Well written. I'm going to favorite this. I love this form, as I'm a big proponent of "stream of consciousness" writing. Great write. MD:77.
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