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| Vexed and Tired 2007-11-13 ch 1,  | abuseI think I get this one. It's like when you spend a horrendous amount of time, energy and effort doing a painting, trying to express something incredibly personal and then the first person comes to look at it and goes "Why can't you paint nice things...like countrysides or something pretty?" Excuse the art analogy. You'll have to forgive my inner art student. I like the way you haven't separated the lines on this. It makes it more whole and collective, like a story or a statement. |
| Frogalog 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abusedamn. so much depth here, even though i have no idea what you're specifically talking about, i can sense the power lurking behind the words. |