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| Kusje 2007-10-10 ch 1,  | abuseLovely imagery and sensory details -- it really brings a person into captivating the moment and motives. Great job. |
| Basara 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abusebloody, tragedic... yet... sweet... ironic... nice... |
| alice 2007-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuselove the last line nicely done |
| Frogalog 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseawesome. i always admire a talented haiku writer. |