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Two Short Poems About Nothing or Maybe Something
Chidori Nadare
2007-10-11 . chapter 1
The rhythm is controlled but very beautiful. The first one struck me more. Great job.
-C.N
alice
2007-10-02 . chapter 1
personally i liked teh first better
but they're both beautiful... rhythm nd rhyme are controlled nicely
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