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| Brivolbn7Q 2008-08-15 ch 4, anon. | abuseVery nice writing, and concept too. I look forward to reading more. Update as soon as you can. |
| eamane tinuviel 2008-08-14 ch 4,  | abusefinally! an update! :P poor luce.. uh. luna. now he has icky men trying to reach up his skirt. i think it's time to switch to a T-rating! haha. i'm wondering how miss lauder will play a part in the story. she strikes me as one of those ladies who look like they're an easy conquest in bed, yet they turn out to be the one conquesting YOU. talk about dominatrix XD i hope you continue with this story and update CONSISTENTLY. ^_^ #8! |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-07-16 ch 3, | abuseLOL i like it, update soon- will you be switching points of view, to say Isabellas? |
| amber-skies 2007-10-16 ch 3, | abusegood story, really nice plot, original and lovely characterisation of luce; he's not very typical, is he, more...effeminate! great idea and well done avoiding cliche. oh, and happy birthday for the 22nd. :D |
| CarlyJo 2007-10-16 ch 3, | abuseAwesome job on this! Loved it! Oh, so weird, my sweet sixteen is today and yours is in 6 days! So cool! Any ways, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!*throws confetti* oh and please update soon! *puppy dog eyes* |
| eamane tinuviel 2007-10-02 ch 2, | abusedear lady, do you really think you could spite me with this chapter? /sigh/ and i thought you knew me :P quite the contrary actually, your chapter amused me. you and only you could take a boy and force him in, heaven forbid, a corset and a dress. give me your best shot, dear. and oh! me? being conceited? never! (note the dripping sarcasm!) + raven + |
| CarlyJo 2007-10-02 ch 2, | abuseInteresting concept. Can't wait to read more! UPDATE SOON! |
| eamane tinuviel 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseoh emm gee! i like this story! it looks like someone struck gold! (pun very much intended) keep going! |