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| LaraineGlass 2008-01-28 ch 1,  | abuseWow! Awesome story. I so love the ending. You've definitely got some talent. Keep it up, and I hope you write more. 'Til here, I'm off to read Roses: For A Child, Ice Cream: For A Lady, definitely looking forward to it... |
| Blue 2007-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am such a sucker for stories like this. Its well written and I like the way it turned out. |
| Heart Of The Moon 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet... |
| psychotic aiba lover 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseAW! :(( Mahn, that was such a sweet story! :(( it was really just super cute! :(( GREAT JOB DUDE! :D Hahahahahah! YEAH! mahn, hahah, but you know, the parts where you mention that aldric had cold body features and stuff reminded me of edward cullen. D: WAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH! I LOVE THEM! :D |
| Catherine Kate 2007-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseEi, that's a very nice story... I like it! Just one question, what happend to his fiancee? But if you include that, it wouldn't be a one-shot story, right? Well, just curious... BTW: the poem's good! -catherine_kate- |
| Songs of an Angel 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuse“Because,” I started to explain, “My boyfriend should be the one calling me that!” “But you don’t even have one.” He replied when I almost heard his eyes rolling. “Exactly! You’re not my boyfriend.” “Yeah but—“ ...CUTE! I felt his cold hand in between my fingers as he intertwined his with mine while we were entering the elevator. ...sweet but freaky! ;p cold lips give me a quick peck on my cheek. ...O_o...cute and sweet but freaky :p “Am I too late?” I felt his warm breath near my ear as he whispered this to me. ...Now this is really damn cute! ;p |