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| Oracle of Destiny 2007-10-23 ch 3,  | abuseVery interesting. I hope he does get the girl! |
| Oracle of Destiny 2007-10-23 ch 2, | abuseAnother cool chapter - I enjoyed it hehe. |
| AmataEstelle 2007-10-09 ch 3, | abuseThe plot gets thicker I see. I'm very interested to see how everything turns out. I'll be waiting. Amata Estelle |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-10-05 ch 3, | abuseVery opinionated guy huh? Lol. It's interesting, Getting kinda cute too, lol. Update soon? Possibly a little longer chapter? Idk. I just run out of stuff to read so quickly! :P ~Ray |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-10-02 ch 2, | abuseYeah. So totally a guy. Only cares about what he can get away with and how great the woman is. Lol. I still like it. It's worth keeping an eye on. See what happens, ya know? Good job, ~Ray |
| AmataEstelle 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is very attention grabbing. I look forward to seeing more of this story. Amata Estelle |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea. It's something new and different. Interested to see what you can do with it. Don't like his attitude about his friend, it's not very nice.. But ya know. I guess that happens. You caught my attention. Update soon? ~Ray |
| silver-teardropz 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseLooks like this can turn out to be a very interesting story, and I'm eager to read the next chapters. I like that you gave the main character an interesting background. Write more soon:) |
| Oracle of Destiny 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseYou should carry on with this - I'd like to see how this stoty plays out. Anyway good job so far and I found some bits amusing and funny indeed :) |