Wow. I absolutely RELISH the amount of depth you put in this. Every line drenched in intensity. And I love the bit of irony in this - how unreal the girl is, yet, in the end, the narrator is more unreal than she. (At least that's how I intrepret it!)

You don't know how much I've missed you! That was so beautiful, every single time it always is. (Though that last line did leave me wishing autumn would get under way already.)

I love the vividness of the imagery, and the idea behind it all- of ghosts and imaginary friends, the constant rub of want, need, and reality. I love it, I love it.

Well written story.

Good job!

Have a wonderful day. :)

Thanks for reviewing my story "Consequences of a Happy Ending". I really appreciate it.

~Twilight Starr~

This story is white! I see winter coming.

Wonderful. You've perfected the writing of intensity here. You string us slowly along with details. The character that the narrator is talking about; I really like her. I usually do, but this one stands out. She is fragile in a way that is different from a lot of your other characters.

I love it. Well done.