I keep trying to find something critically objective to say about your works, like "you should improve..." or "it lacks..", just so it doesn't seem I'm just saying nice things for politeness' sake...but the thing is, I really don't have anything critical to say...your work leaves me spellbound, one foot in the real world, the other in the one you've created, and it, a quality that I've always associated with great art, makes me think and ponder and reconsider, it leaves an imprint, a mark on my thoughts, instead of flying over my head and away into nothing.

a great exploration, expression of that feeling that can't always be voiced, a girl trying to find things that are worth it, things that are real. I really connected with this piece. Awesome job.

Beautiful. Great writing, an amazing little story. I'm really impressed.