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| cerasylvania 2008-07-02 ch 21, anon. | abusefell in love with this story or as dawn whould say llef ni evol htiw siht yrots so yeah this is good and a great idea i love everything about it. |
| Joe Skittles 2008-06-26 ch 21,  | abuseThat was a wonderful story to read when depressed! It made me laugh, literally, every 5 minutes. The end made my go into fits of girly giggling, which is quite an impressive feat! Delightful, sappy, humorous, sarcastic, well written, and a great ending. Thanks for putting that out for the world to see! |
| FIR3 AND ICE 2008-06-23 ch 21, | abuseCool Charectors! |
| Hanban 2008-06-21 ch 21, | abuseLOL I love Blair. But not Chuck. I mean, what did he see from that blonde bimbo secretary? Haha. And crap. My mom's nagging me to sleep. So this one's short. So shoot me. I will miss Torrence- and oh yeah, Dawn. :p Go redheads! Even though I haven't met a redhead before. Sigh. Curse these genetics. Bannyban |
| Hanban 2008-06-19 ch 20, | abuseOh gosh. How I wanted to be Elaine. Sigh. And holy crap. Is Torrence's mind working properly? But don't answer that, since I assume most of the readers and especially you know that it isn't. :D Gah. If only I had a Torrence of my own, without the scoobydoobydoo thing working. But unfortunate for me, I'm stuck with the demure (yes, like a girl) boys here. Sigh. I really need to get out of this country. And dye my hair blonde (which would totally bring out my tan skin) and put on blue contact lenses so I can snag me a hubba-hubba. :D Crap. I can't seem to stop myself from telling the whole world about my deepest, darkest desires (ooh, D! :D) because I was 'inspired' by a fictional story. And finally, so I can get back on my homework, I effin cannot relate with Dawn. Because one, she's blonde, two, she's tall, and three, she has an accent. But wait, I DO have an accent. But hers sounds a lot more acceptable. XD And now, I must finally (ooh, I'm hooked to the word!) read on the EPILOGUE ELAINE. :D Hanban/Bannyban/Minivan(lol) |
| rockjam 2008-06-15 ch 21, | abuseNice story. :D |
| Pieces of the sun 2008-06-01 ch 21, | abuseKinda cheesy but it was cute. I'm sad to hear about Jessica! I used to watch the Saddle Club all the time until they stopped making new ones. She sounds like a really nice person. Why does it have to be the nice people who die? |
| katieee 2008-05-27 ch 2, | abuseHEY. I have a Nicola in my religion class. And this kid just calls her Nic-oh-la for kicks. |
| Hydie 2008-05-25 ch 21, | abuseI love it. What a GREAT story. :) |
| artificial destiny 2008-05-25 ch 11, | abuseLOVE IT. totally makes me laugh XD |
| MJ 2008-05-23 ch 21, anon. | abuseCool chapter. Sad that Dawn and Torrence are at an end. Yes I do love you and you know it. Amelie and Hamish sound so adorable. What would they name their other children? Would they have 7 kids like Damns aunt said? I gotta love ya and leave ya coz I gotta get off the net so. Love ya chapter. Sad that it's the end. I'll get over it. :-) |
| oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE 2008-05-21 ch 21, | abuseHAHAHA omg this was amazing. i love the way u ended it. cute lil moral at then lol. amazing story |
| oopoo 2008-05-20 ch 21, anon. | abuseo |
| blackbubbleblue 2008-05-19 ch 20, | abusewhat is wrong with mush? nothing. i know you like mush too so haa. but it makes so much more sens after reading this. i still can't see how i sciped this chapter well sorry and sorry in advance my actions at your weding. |
| Icara 2008-05-18 ch 21, anon. | abuseDelightful...need I say more? Fresh Funky and Awesome... okay I have homework to get back to so I'm not going to toot your horn any longer *oops that sounded dirty... oh well* -Icara |