OHMYGOD. this was like, so amazing! =) you make me laugh muchly ! i enjoyed this a heck of a lot.
LONG LIVE THE QUEEN (she's probably not gonna live very long, dont you think? but charles annoys me...so..you know, long live the queen) =D sorry for rambling there, i get carried away sometimes

slightly confused the whole way through... editing needed? Interesting characters tho :)

KAJSHFLADKJFLK AW THIS IS SO SWEET AND ADORABLE OMGG

ERM...I'm a little confused. Why can Dawn/Bunny see Torrence but her mom can't? And then why can everyone else see him when he's at school when he says he's supposed to be invisible? But other than that, it sounds like its going to be a really good story. Can't wait to read more.

FANTASTIC! =]

Loved it

I LOVE Algebra! It's so fun!

Le gaspe!! Ghosts!!

loved the story !

Wait, am I missing something? What curse? And when did she go to Archie's house?
Help! I'm drowning in a sea of un-knowing-ness!
Tata now.
~chaos.into.shadow
p.s. love the story!

Hey, lurve that story, and I love that other one that you wrote. The name escapes me, but I think it had something to do with Remmy and Reese.
So only one thingy that burgs me. I know you've already cleared this up, but I was raised to be uber patriotic. (No, I'm not from the midwest, I'm from a major liberal stae, and yes, I know everything my country, or the people in charge does isn't right) Okay, um, I'm pretty sure that every single person I've met knows where te U.S. of A. is on a map. I mean, It's humongaloid, you know. Also, when I was a very small someone, I knew other countries on the map, along with my lovable friends.
So, just wanted to clear that up, and what's with the foreign language thing? (I'm not saying that in a mean way, I'm just curious.)
Luvs,
~chaos.into.shadow

I really like this story, your a great writer. im really glad i decided to read this. once i started i couldnt stop. i stayed up till 5 am this morning reading it. I love the way it ened. :)

its official!..this is the best non-supernatural supernatural story ive read so far..i love the fact that even though Tor has the power of invisibility, he doesnt use that often..n its funny how long it takes for them to notice that the only reason y dawn can see him is bcuz she's his true love(aaw)..anyways her lil sister is fun n so is she..they like experiments their personalities r fun too...gr8 story 5stars!

Like one fifth could be like all the toddlers and kindergarteners. Americans however suck at spellin. Go Amerika! Heart the story.

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i finished it i finished it i finished it!
WOT
Awesome funny great romantic story!
:)
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