loved the story !

Wait, am I missing something? What curse? And when did she go to Archie's house?

Help! I'm drowning in a sea of un-knowing-ness!

Tata now.

.shadow

p.s. love the story!

Hey, lurve that story, and I love that other one that you wrote. The name escapes me, but I think it had something to do with Remmy and Reese.

So only one thingy that burgs me. I know you've already cleared this up, but I was raised to be uber patriotic. (No, I'm not from the midwest, I'm from a major liberal stae, and yes, I know everything my country, or the people in charge does isn't right) Okay, um, I'm pretty sure that every single person I've met knows where te U.S. of A. is on a map. I mean, It's humongaloid, you know. Also, when I was a very small someone, I knew other countries on the map, along with my lovable friends.

So, just wanted to clear that up, and what's with the foreign language thing? (I'm not saying that in a mean way, I'm just curious.)

Luvs,

.shadow

I really like this story, your a great writer. im really glad i decided to read this. once i started i couldnt stop. i stayed up till 5 am this morning reading it. I love the way it ened. :)

its official!..this is the best non-supernatural supernatural story ive read so far..i love the fact that even though Tor has the power of invisibility, he doesnt use that often..n its funny how long it takes for them to notice that the only reason y dawn can see him is bcuz she's his true love(aaw)..anyways her lil sister is fun n so is she..they like experiments their personalities r fun too...gr8 story 5stars!

Like one fifth could be like all the toddlers and kindergarteners. Americans however suck at spellin. Go Amerika! Heart the story.

:p

i finished it i finished it i finished it!

WOT

Awesome funny great romantic story!

:)

lo x

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!

hilarious!

hahaha

haha this story is really entertaing :P

ima gunna keep on reading!

x

When Jamilla comes out with Dennis, go you actually mean Sean? Dennis was Dawn's 'guy' name.

And I'm loving the story :) Dawn is a great character, a little unreal, but really amusing.

i absolutely adore you.

I love your stories!

this was exceptionally beautiful.

another perfectly awesome and totally funny story :D

lol i just love this one...i was laughing the entire time while reading it :)

there were all those parts that are just pretty unbelievable but they totally matched the character and all so it worked

i dont know how you write these cute, humorous stories, but hope you keep on doing it C:

Nice story!

Great job!

Jaliy!

Dawn is just like a copy of myself! Right down to the name, even. I love threatening people to get my way. I mean... uh... persuasion.

I only got to finish the first seven chapters tonight, but I'll definitely read more tomorrow.

Good job so far, though! -LP

I love this story! (does the awesome story squee). Okay...that was...really weird...anyways, I'm glad you posted this. It totally made my weekend. And it's awesome.