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someone like me
Lord Craigus
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
It's amazing how this poem is quite short, yet contains/says a hell of a lot. The feelings of anger and disapointment are very clear but still feel suttle, very well done.
dress her up in fairytales
2007-10-02 . chapter 1
such a small piece portraying such huge emotions.
you'll get someone better than him.
sylvia's syndrome
2007-10-01 . chapter 1
I think you've done a really good job of writing a poem that people can relate too. We all know this feeling of disappointment. Keep up the good work!
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