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| kimmyhate007 2008-07-26 ch 1,  | abusei love it! |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-05-24 ch 17, | abusei'm so tired. i don't remember anything from before. i'm too lazy to go read. so tired... must read... so tired... falling asleep... tired |
| Syl Gordon 2008-05-23 ch 17, | abuseYAY!*hug attacks* You updated!!(I know, I'm a hypocrite) Awesomeness! It'll all work out, I know it! *nods* Cute romance stories aren't right without a happy ending!! Great chapter! I can't wait to see more!(Don't worry, I'm working on making myself less of a hypocrite) |
| crysintherain 2008-03-26 ch 16, | abuseOMG YAYAYAY! i feel so special having it dedicated to me! i luv ya too my sexi mama! hahaha. lol I CNT BLIEVE THEY ARE OVER WITH AH I ALMOST STARTED CRYING! HW PATHETIC! |
| Syl Gordon 2008-03-16 ch 16, | abuseShe really doesn't ever listen... And she really should... Heh Awesomeness, can't wait for more! |
| eclipse-of-the-suns 2008-03-16 ch 16, | abusehey hey person well since you said that if we reviewed you'd be happy, i'm reviewing to make you happy k? anyhoo, i like this story so far and think that it's rather good, missy is a **, because that was really low, i mean kissing someone eles's boyfriend, while they're watching?? wtf? so yeah, please update very very very soon k cool over and out |
| Not Dead Fred 2008-03-16 ch 3, | abuseYou should use italics for a character's thoughts, bold for author's notes, and remove the "-1" from the begining of the chapters. Also it might be a good idea to use the line at the end of the body of the chapter to separate it from and notes you'd care to make at the bottom. These tips are just to assist you with the overall presentation, and I hope you'll at least take them under advisement. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-03-15 ch 16, | abuseGOD YOU F U C K I N G S L U T W H O R E! DUDE! WHAT THE F U C K IS WRONG WITH YOU?! YOU STUPID AGH! GOD YOU'RE A DUMB B I T C H! THEY CAN'T BREAK UP! DUDE! I HATE YOU! |
| crysintherain 2007-12-28 ch 15, | abuseUpdate quicker biotch... |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-12-15 ch 15, | abuseVOICES ALWAYS LIE! ALWAYS! how could Rae even think about doubting Ed's cliched love to her? no! the wait was worth kicking missy's **. and i haven't updated my story since november 3rd. haha. sux to be me! |
| crysintherain 2007-12-08 ch 14, | abusewtf world of women? ur writing faster than i can read lol keep it going! |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2007-11-25 ch 14, | abuseI LIKE COOKIES! give me a cookie! yay! drowning in cookies! cookies, cookies, cookies! srry. :) i liked it! especially the part with Missy! |
| mickeyyearbook 2007-11-24 ch 14, | abuseok for that cookie comment at the end Luke is my hero! and great job update SOON! :] |
| eating staples 2007-11-23 ch 14, | abuseHe... this one made me laugh, well, o.k. I admit it, I giggled. Just don't tell anyone. |
| Inkhearts and Inkstains 2007-11-22 ch 14, | abuseHey I love your story, and the sense of humour. PLease keep writing. |