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| Lady Fingers 2008-07-24 ch 1,  | abusemadeline is just a cover up for all the little girls and boys that cry wolf |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusesad but well written. hauntingly beautiful as my friend would say. a little dark but understandable. |
| sha-nae-nae 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abusewow, this blew me away! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely intense. I love this piece. Its so bold and brutal. In a way, I can relate. Well done! This is going on my favorites list. Sorry it took me so long to return your review. I was away for a few weeks and didn't get a chance to get online. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseWow - an amazing write. I love the first stanza most of all. Beautiful job. And thanks for the review on "Dead Cliches". Rowan. |
| felicia13 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. Amazing story. There's imagry, but it's not traditional imagry where you see what's being described... it's more like staring at an ink blot and suddenly seeing a circus. It's just there. That's what this poem is. You write like an ink blot circus. The first stanza is amazing and the second flows right into the heart of the poem. I take issue with your lack of punctuation, but I can see how it adds to the poem as a whole, so I can get over it, but only a little. Felicia. |
| Independence-Individuality 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSometimes all you can do is hand over the bandaid and peroxide and go stand in the corner. Keep writing. |
| His Mercy's Waiting 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseHmm...I liked it. Good job on the descriptions, they were very vivid. "Overandover" --I liked how you made that one word, it really gave a sense of continuation. Keep writing! |
| Ashelin 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI really adored the first two lines. For some reason, I relate to those lines. Destructive beauty, that's what I see in this. Great job. |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseSo destructive and beautiful, I love it. The childish form of a band aid then to suicide is just so dark and amazing. Really amazing job. +Faves. |
| Abigail Cathleen 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting poem, i liked the way you wrote it, and the mention of the porcelain pieces, very well written - pretty yuina |
| Kyuubi 2007-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseme and my best friend totally relate to this i really like it and she feels like giving u a hug 4 some reason |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseHmm... And these are the poems I wake up to! Another disturbing-yet-well-written one. The words and feel of this whole poem just make it stand out and that ending just gave me the creeps. I mean, it's all stuff I'm totally against (yay for living life!), but it always feels kind of more... stable coming from you. No, I'm still not much of a fan when it comes to the message, but your writing is just so awesome that who even cares? |
| heresyisforlosers 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abusegood flow...interesting message. s.t. |
| Camille the Clever 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseStunning and Sadness; the best combination I love the way you've written this -Camille |