Know that I simply loved this series. I feel you rushed it a bit, and I'm confused half the time on what is happening. Did Elijah and Jacob have sex or not? What is happening now? I understand the need to be cryptic but perhaps pull back a bit?

Also, for those not as well versed in fey lore, you might want to explain exactly what a Leannan sidhe is. And what the Unseelie court is.

Anyway, I adored this, since I love the Victorian time period, faeries, and boys lovin' boys.

Do keep up the good work!

bum bum BUM! :) I wonder what shall happen with them. *snicker* awesomeness!

Jacob is a cute little thing and if Meadow wasn't so haunty I think I'd like him

what did he expect? Meadow said he'd take care of his soul, but hey he didn't have a very bright future anyway. :) great job!

OH. Very interesting and shall continue to read.

yay new chapter.

"Jacob sighed, taking the man's hand.
"'Let's get you to bed.' He decided, leading the Lord into the bedroom."
That was so funny XD

omg you are back! yaay! updates. i thought you were never going to update! i kind of thought you were done or did not wish to write anymore. But keep going! keep up the good work. any more updates?...

I absolutely luv this story! Plz update! I do not just want to review and ask for an update for that would be extremely rude on my behalf. Therefore, I will try to give some critique. (plz you don't hav to agree with everything im saying). I started this story today morning and read it all (shows you how drawn i am to the story). Firstly, i really like how you wrote the line, "The night sky darkened fast, eating up the last remnants of the summer sun." I am pretty sure you took some time writting it for its well thought-out. Secondly, i luv the way it is extremely hard to understand what is taking place, but it all the pieces join together. Lastly, I would luv it if you could show a bit more character development, a bit more discription on Jacob's feelings. last but not the least, LUV THE STORY!
-lpluver

So Jacob's a muse...hmm. And his ancestors killed Marlowe...that's just funny.

Oh no! what's going to happen to poor Jacob? This is the first time I've read this story, so I really dunno. Thanks for the update btw.

Oo I'm so excited you're rewriting this one! I liked it before, and I already like it again.

I'm really into this story, I want to see what happens. Your writing style is very smooth and fits with the genre.

hmm interesting.

You have certainly not lost any of your elegant style. But I am concerned that you are repeating this scene, but you are the writer and I will wait to see where you take the story.