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| simpleplan13 2008-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseI like all the things you say you hate because we all have insecurities like that... my favorite is the phrase "recycled soul" that was awesome.. I like the ending too... very sweet |
| loversdream17 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat Job! I can relate so much to this people for i felt that way many times. Keep up the good work. Mandi~4~life Loversdream17 |
| Christian Chick 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet! It's amazing how one person can make us feel beautiful isn't it? The added bold, italics, and underline really helped to end the poem nicely and stress your point. Great work! |
| Wordkeeper 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was really nice. I like the description, and well, it was cutesy. Nicely done. |
| phantom66 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abusewow! that woz lyk totally beautiful! |
| Ashelin 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseOh man. How could I say I don't love this? Becase it is so beautiful, and so true. How people can make us feel like that. I can't even put words to make this poem more. It is perfect. Wonderful job. |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written d:) |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseSuch a sweet poem! Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| choco man 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseamazing baby, amazing ^^ my favorite by far, in the way its written, and what its about kinda left me speechless at the end XD i love you |