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| DiaRose 2007-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat's cute. It's very good and captivating, and somehow just very cute in nature. It makes me smile. Love, ~Dia |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseFirst of I love the 'la la la-ing' line, it really made me smile when I read it. I also loved the end, it's so playful and like you suggest in the poem itself, it's very light. the thing that stuck out the most to me was the image of how they are barely touching, and the power that comes from that. Sometimes being a hairs-length away from someone you're yearning for is all the more sexy, and powerful then actually touching them. You portray that emotion wonderfully. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseDoes not suck. Nothing you write does, really. I really liked this, there were a couple of really good lines. Nice. Rowan. |
| Camilleta 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseI love good poems with great endings. ^_^ |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was so cute. |
| painted.music 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abusekonban wa May I ask WHY you felt the need to post? I usually write and then decide to post, not decide to post and then write. LoL, I think you have it a bit backwards, LoL. In any case I don't know if I loved this poem. I liked it for sure, but I can't say LOVED it. I did love the line, "Like boiling a cup of sunshine," though. That was absolutely brilliant. *grin* Zaijen -Shan- |