Hm, so it takes place in the 40s-50s?
I have to say, that is pretty awesome. Lol I was kind of starting to wonder why know seemed to have, or even just use a cellphone in your story. Now I know! XD

I'm on chapter 7 and so far it rocks! I can't wait to see what happens next! And about what Jess said? It dosen't really mention in your story wether or not they are black or white. I know it mentions about "pale skin" but so far it hasen't said anything to get upset about :( I don't know, I'll keep reading!

Yea I kinda get where ur coming from, most of the stories on this site don't have much ethnic diversity so I'm not surprised and ur probably right it's too late in the story and u should just keep going ur doing a great job, lol I just hate in the latest chappy how Zero just blew Brad off like that lol what a meanie

WHAT?! Of course there's no racism among humans you didn't included any humans with diverse ethnic backgrounds! Their all white! But the whole the humans are racist against demons but b/c they are scared of them- that makes sense to me. But what do u mean by demons replacing black people? Seriously represnting "humans" as only white people and "demons" as black people and other people of color is just wrong!