Interesting... thats the best word to describe it. I like the characters you created out of the fairy tales every one knows and it was a cool idea. Your very descriptive and i'm able to picture the scenes and the characters as i read. Keep up the good work i hope you continue soon.

This was such a great chapter! It makes me sad, because he loved her (sorry can't spell or say his name so he, will be known as he or Z :D) but the snow queen had to ruin it all! And Angi doesn't even realize that he was going to give her his heart! Keep going! Your plot line is a really good idea!