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| openheadspace 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. I can totally relate. :) |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Luny Loona 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseNice repetition. No offence but I don't like how it starts off with one rhyme and then it goes onto a different pattern and doesn't really come back, if you know what I mean. The rhythm also goes out slightly but otherwise, no comment. |