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Reviews For: Where is my anger

openheadspace
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseAwesome. I can totally relate. :)
Twilight Starr
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseGreat poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~
Luny Loona
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseNice repetition. No offence but I don't like how it starts off with one rhyme and then it goes onto a different pattern and doesn't really come back, if you know what I mean. The rhythm also goes out slightly but otherwise, no comment.
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