|Reviews for Age and the Grail|
| RiddleSolved 10/2/07 . chapter 1
I loved the last stanza there. Lovely.
The whole feeling actually reminds me of my latest poem though... Life seldom turns out as you want I guess.
But more to the point, I think a few of the lines were a bit long to give the flow I usually like while reading, and I'm a bit sceptical to no capital letters whatsoever.
But well, that's my personal taste, and since I keep writing this long thing the conclusion is that I liked it.