Wow! That was a terrific way of portraying a very common childhood fear. Personally, I was never afraid of what might be in my closet, but in reading this, I even began to feel paranoid and tense. Awesome job, babe!

Poor kid. Great story too!

Good, intriguing beginning.

I like your penname.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~