this is really good...i dont quite get the mileage references though.

Not one of my favorites of yours to be honest, but I stilled J'ADORED it! I love the sassy punky teen you potray in each of your stories. I think maybe for this story it would have been better if it was a shy girl coming out of her shell and totally blowing up on the guy but the sassy teen still blew me away in amazingness.

very well written

need more soon

and i didn't open fictionpres...

This was an awesome piece. I really felt your feelings behind your words. I love it.

M.