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| Dark-Passion67 2008-06-26 ch 6, | abuseThis story is very promising. I like it alot. Can I kill Jarrod? Anyway, I can't wait for the story to become active again:) |
| IndianPrincess 2008-03-26 ch 6, | abuseOk I started reading this story tonight and it was getting quite good so do you plan to continue it because I would really like to find out what happens next. Brent seems like a really sweet guy I just hope he if for real and not gonna hurt her so please update soon thanks. A New Fan, IP |
| JadeDream 2008-03-16 ch 6, | abuseoh that jerk! and you go brent! haha...well update soon i cant wait to see what happens! ~Chels |
| Spanishfly69 2008-03-13 ch 6, | abuseI am now officially HOOKED!... You have to update... I never post reviews on stories on here but you have my first review ever... Loving the story can't wait to read more. |
| SunsetSnooze 2008-02-28 ch 6, | abuseheya omg plese update soon! so scanalous that jarrod actually raped . its a gud twist . cant wait for ur next u[date! xoxoxoxo |
| mysticfox19 2008-02-23 ch 6, | abuseThis proves how big of a douchebag or how little of a man Jarrod is. I think Brent gives him a beatdown...hell, I'll give him a beat down. Update soon! |
| confessions 2008-02-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseArgh. Jarrod needs more than rotten tomatoes, he needs a beatdown. I hope brent pummels him to the ground. Go Brent!! Update soon |
| vio923 2008-02-23 ch 5, | abuseJarrod was physically abusive to her and raped her. What she needs is "help" -- speaking to a pshychologist -- in order to come to terms with what happened. There is no way that she can still love Jarrod. If anything she may be blaming herself for Jarrod's actions (typical behavior by women that have been abused). Now at least I can understand why she is still concerned about Jarrod finding her and punishing her. However, if she takes him back -- then it proves that she needs "help" -- and then some. Breat is great to her -- very patient and understanding. |
| N.M.B. 2008-02-23 ch 6, | abuseYet another example for why I need a taser. Just so you know, my review should count as 20 so now you can post. I'm just kidding. But I can't wait for the moment when Jarrod is stuck in a dark alley with Brent, who has a very lovley taser just waiting to zap him. Keep posting! |
| Luv-TU 2008-02-23 ch 6, | abuseCan't wait for next chapter. |
| Chels 2008-01-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseaww i love brent! i found my favorite!! poor sara, at the end i mean...but update soon cant wait to see what happens! |
| sadisticprune 2007-12-26 ch 5, | abuseomg, even though jarrod's a jerk, i have a feeling that he's going to soften becausse he's like the leading man right? or whatver you call it. he's the protragonist of this story 'cause of the summary. you wrote it using his and sara's point of view. I LOVE this kind of story! omg! |
| confessions 2007-12-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseOMG!! Jarrod is the definition of jerk!! He doesn't even give her a chance to explain. And what type of friend is that; more like an enemy!! I hope she does throw in a punch or two. lol. Update soon. :) |
| vio923 2007-12-26 ch 6, | abuseThis chapter explained quite a bit. I still think that Brent is better for Sara. It has been three years since everything happened. It is more than time for both Sara and Jarrod to let go and move. While Jarrod thinks she cheated, after three years he should have moved on and left that incident in his past. At this point he should no longer be trying to "get even and make things worse for Sara." And Sara needs to let go of the past also, she has a child and needs to focus on her current life. And no matter what her state she shouldn't take Jarrod back. He was physically abusive. She can't trust him. What if he becomes abusive towards their child. Abusers do not change -- do some research. I'd be petrified of putting my child into that type of situation. Hope you update more frequently. |
| heartfeltlove 2007-12-26 ch 6, | abuseI was just thinking about this story 5 minutes ago then I checked my emails and there you were! I should think about your stories more often...lol Brent is a good guy if he stuck around after that break down. |