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| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseSounds like it pretty much sucks to be a Romantic! But still, it's intriguing, and could be fun, and I can just picture someone following this advice to the letter. Yet again, you've made a character type that's very distinctive-- not just the Romantic, but the Romantic that makes the decisions between whiskey and vodka. And, of course, these things make the essay fun to read! I don't like the lack of consistency in parts, though. There are some things that romantics may do, others that they must, others that they must hope others will do. As a philosophy, things shouldn't be mandated; as a handbook, everything should be! Since this is a philosophy, everything should be highly suggested, not required. --Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!) |
| One-Hand Clap 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was absoloutely hilarious! I've always loved satire, and the way it was so beautifully woven together - you've got talent, definitely. 'if you INSIST on living'... Hahaha! I really liked this, and it's favourited, and the reasons why are: i) The humour used in it is perfectly executed. ii) It relates to many pseudo-romantics out there, and is something you can relate to when you have elder siblings who are SURE they are Rimbaud, the second coming. i) I just want to say it's hilarious. Again. - Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
| Loyal Soul 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseI wish make a translation to spanish language if you let me, because you work is angsty but funny and cool. |
| A Moved Stranger. 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseNever have I bothered to review someone's work. Sure I've thought of doing so now and then, but somehow.. never got along to do so. A Romantic's Philosophy.. I've never read so many words, phrases, sentences stringed together so perfectly in its multiple bias and imperfections. I'm sure a lot of readers apply themselves to the paragraph, and some if not most see things in their own way; as have I. |
| windy girl 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseHa, that is a lovely philosophy. (The whiskey part made me laugh. My mom can chug that stuff...) -pb |
| xx-cronopio-xx 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseCan I adopt this as my mission statement? :) *favs* |
| servatis-a-pereculum 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuse^_^ Cute! |
| Lightning Storm 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, I likeed it. After the part "Drink often" I was all smile :P Great job |
| luv me like no other 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abusehahaha, very creative, i liked reading it, and it made me smile at the end. I think i'll choose to live like a romantic... |
| RandoMaia 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseHehe. This was amusing. And describes someone I know pretty well -.- |
| chibichoco 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseHaha! Well... some of that stuff sounds fun... hehehe... nice. Made me smile. :) |