Aww..this is so sad. :(

.thinking

This was good! I liked it, nicely done!

Interesting poem. I've never heard of tanka's before. I'll have to look it up. It seems rather short though, but its written very well. Keep up the good work and thank-you for your reveiw.

-Sincerly-

Melanie

Another nice one, though a little choppy for my taste. I put meaning to this one, as I have yelled at a gravestone before, out of agony and sorrow for the loss of someone...

Once again, thank you for your writing.

_Vincent, SN

Powerful in only so many words. You captured me from the very beginning and my heart fell as I read the second to last line. Very powerful. Great job.

Sad. I like it and it's simplicity, yet it can also be complex if you look at it from a different angle... There are so many ways that it could be taken!

The first line in this piece is very powerful. I absolutely love it. Another job well done, Keep it Up!

I like this... the ending is powerful and beautifully done

Short and beautifully sad. You've captured these feelings very well with your words. :) keep it up x

-Crazy O

Hey Girl,

Back On loversdream, first time i heard of a tanka but i like it. Then again I usually always like whatever you write no matter what. Keep up the wonderful work your one of my favs and i enjoy reading it.

Mandi

Beautifully poignant and vivid, and such power packed into so few lines. I really do admire your work. Thanks so much for the review and may you continue your fantastic writing as well.

D

wow, this is good...sad, but good...

good work. keep writing.

Something special. When words run from each other, hand in hand.

I love this one.

10 reviews already! Someone's on fire! :P

No but it's a really beautiful poem. Short but... not sweet exactly, since that's not really the mood of the poem. But you know what I mean. Perfect imagery. Beautiful.