Reviews for The Girl I was When There was You

Beautiful Inspiration 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseOh my gosh. This poem is really powerful. I love it. Fantastic work! I guess it helps that i can strongly relate to it. It is almost like you took the words right out oh my mouth. It made the hairs on my arm stand. Really, it is a brilliant piece of work. ~Rachael
Redeemed 2007-10-03 ch 1,	abuseLast four lines speak volumes to me. That's the story of life, isn't it? Sometimes we pass into each others' lives and right on out. Each time we grow a little. That's what this poem said to me.
crimsonscars 2007-10-03 ch 1,	abuselove it, write more=]
emiray 2007-10-02 ch 1,	abusei like how direct the poem's meaning was. however, rhyming would have made the poem ever better. nevertheless, this has great potential to become an even better poem with rhyme. :)
Artemis Anderson 2007-10-02 ch 1,	abuseWonderfully written.
Moondog Dozier 2007-10-02 ch 1,	abuseI like the raw and sincere emotion in this. The true feeling throughout makes it relatable for the reader. The personal-individual voice enhances how the reader reacts to the words. Marvelous example of how recollection and emotion can intermingle to create a recognizable progression. Well written. MD:77.